Dear My Love, lazy edit

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Dear My Love,

Even though I have all your heart,
helplessly I fear us falling apart.
Although I might have made a mistake,
my only hope was that you'd wake.
We always said it would last forever,
frightening how sudden things seem to sever.
See your eyes are pale and grey,
gravely it seems you've slipped away.
Awkward to see you limb by limb,
loosely I remember removing them.
Though you'll fit nicely I'm quite sure,
shivering below my freezer's door,
do not knock is all I implore,
or finger by finger I'll settle the score.


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Dear My Love,

I wrote these words to fill a hole within your soul;
so alone now if truth be told.
Today it always seems your caress is so cold.
Careful now you've just slept,
slightly scary now I haven't wept.
We always said it would last forever,
frightening how slightly things seem to sever.
See your eyes are pale and grey,
gravely it seems you've slipped away.
Awkward to see you limb by limb,
loosely I remember removing them.
Though you'll fit nicely I'm quite sure,
shivering below my freezer's door,
do not knock is all I implore,
or finger by finger I'll settle the score.