Eternal Recurrence

[olive_morphia]

I like the straightforwardness and simplicity that you use to talk about a heavy concept. See below for some comments. :-)

One of my recent ones. Any critique is welcome.

I wander to distant lands
to find my soul
from down below.
At times, the journey is gloom.
If only it would end
so very soon. --a bit awkward...
Many times, I have trembled,
fallen to a stupor
with my head on the ground.
My tears are really blood,
I'm bleeding sorrow,
I'm at the new low. --This is weak and cliché. You can do better ;-)

So many others are just like me,
bleeding eternally
from their inner void.
Then there are those who numb themselves --does this imply that the others, like you, don't numb themselves? all you say is that you are bleeding eternally, but when you say "then there are those...", it implies that they are somehow different. clarify.
from the hear of hell
that awaits them.
Others may just be sheep,
eyes open but asleep
throughout their lives.
Eternal Recurrence, why thou betray me? --who/what is Eternal Recurrence? I kind of get who/what this is, but you may want to make this more alive or create some kind of visual for the reader.
Why thou betray us all?
Why torture us all?