Asahi

Asahi

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05-29-2014, 11:53 AM

I enjoyed the last two lines, but even then i feel they are cliche-ish. I enjoyed golden popcorn, less.

Is Asahi a girl or? I did a quick google search, no luck. Sorry if this shows my ignorance.

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Asahi - by Tiger the Lion - 05-29-2014, 11:47 AM

RE: Asahi - by QDeathstar - 05-29-2014, 11:53 AM

RE: Asahi - by Tiger the Lion - 05-29-2014, 12:26 PM

RE: Asahi - by QDeathstar - 05-29-2014, 12:46 PM

RE: Asahi - by Brownlie - 05-29-2014, 01:17 PM

RE: Asahi - by LorettaYoung - 06-01-2014, 10:22 PM

RE: Asahi - by Erthona - 05-29-2014, 01:30 PM

RE: Asahi - by RSaba - 05-29-2014, 02:59 PM

RE: Asahi - by olive_morphia - 05-29-2014, 11:28 PM

RE: Asahi - by Tiger the Lion - 06-01-2014, 08:30 PM

RE: Asahi - by SKDink55 - 06-07-2014, 03:49 AM

RE: Asahi - by LorettaYoung - 06-07-2014, 11:46 AM

RE: Asahi - by Tiger the Lion - 06-07-2014, 08:19 AM

RE: Asahi - by Reesedog914 - 06-07-2014, 10:45 AM

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