The tragedy of a poet without words.
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A poet without words is a mime.

I think the poem needs a trim. And I don't think the third person view helps it it. First person could be more intense, since the speaker has something to gain or lose, not "he" who. I would also attempt to explain why a poet without words is a tragedy at all. If he is a poet without words perhaps he misinterpreted his life's calling. That's the real tragedy here.

A poet without words is someone sad and absurd.

Choked. Hacking letters
into
something
centered.
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The tragedy of a poet without words. - by Apex Vega - 05-23-2014, 02:19 AM
RE: The tragedy of a poet without words. - by Apex Vega - 05-23-2014, 04:42 AM
RE: The tragedy of a poet without words. - by rowens - 05-23-2014, 05:55 AM
RE: The tragedy of a poet without words. - by Apex Vega - 05-26-2014, 02:52 AM
RE: The tragedy of a poet without words. - by QDeathstar - 05-26-2014, 04:26 AM
RE: The tragedy of a poet without words. - by Apex Vega - 05-27-2014, 04:17 AM



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