05-23-2014, 04:42 AM
Hi Ellajam, and thank you for your time.
The composition is just the most natural way for me to write it, and read it. Just follow the commas and you will read it the way I would speak it. The center alignment isn't really anything more than my shallow viewpoint, I think it looks better
And yes, the contradiction is intentional. He is always searching for the now, and by trying to figure out how it will be in the future, he will always continue to search for it, never finding it. Like i think we humans often do, trying to get something while we are doing actions that lead us in the opposite direction.
I am very open to do some editing if someone offers good suggestions on where I should re-phrase etc.
The composition is just the most natural way for me to write it, and read it. Just follow the commas and you will read it the way I would speak it. The center alignment isn't really anything more than my shallow viewpoint, I think it looks better
And yes, the contradiction is intentional. He is always searching for the now, and by trying to figure out how it will be in the future, he will always continue to search for it, never finding it. Like i think we humans often do, trying to get something while we are doing actions that lead us in the opposite direction.
I am very open to do some editing if someone offers good suggestions on where I should re-phrase etc.