Me
#9
The "me" disrupts the flow... just when you're about to actually finish a line and tell us what it really means, there pops up that "me" again. You need to think carefully about how this poem reads, because I found myself tripping over it and struggling to understand exactly what the theme was.
Let's put Rowdy on top of the TV and see which one of us can throw a hat on him first. Thumbsup feedback award
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Messages In This Thread
Me - by Eugene_Moon - 05-10-2014, 01:55 PM
RE: Me - by Erthona - 05-10-2014, 02:58 PM
RE: Me - by kindofahippy - 05-10-2014, 03:06 PM
RE: Me - by billy - 05-10-2014, 04:29 PM
RE: Me - by zmeansy - 05-10-2014, 04:34 PM
RE: Me - by Eugene_Moon - 05-11-2014, 02:44 AM
RE: Me - by billy - 05-27-2014, 09:23 AM
RE: Me - by Wjames - 05-11-2014, 04:31 AM
RE: Me - by JMSelden - 05-22-2014, 02:50 AM
RE: Me - by RSaba - 05-23-2014, 12:05 AM
RE: Me - by Martyl - 05-27-2014, 05:16 AM



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