Where Is Your Anger now? (Note: Expletives used)
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hey, it seems as though its a rap song, and the rhymes are very simple and forced eg

"We want to sit here and bitch and moan
And groan while we play with our phones
We're nothing but drones and clones"

"The government makes off like capers
We can't see above the skyscrapers
Everything tapers"

and because they are simple rhymes you read the poem very quickly and at the end of reading it you get the feeling that you didn't take in anything that you have read.
just a few things but thank you for the read Smile
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Where Is Your Anger now? (Note: Expletives used) - by wasted_dreams011 - 05-12-2014, 11:47 AM
RE: Where Is Your Anger now? (Note: Expletives used) - by rowens - 05-15-2014, 12:21 AM
RE: Where Is Your Anger now? (Note: Expletives used) - by mrwhite - 05-18-2014, 11:32 AM
RE: Where Is Your Anger now? (Note: Expletives used) - by kaiaferg - 05-22-2014, 06:21 AM



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