Collarbones
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I quite like this. It is a lot like how I try to sketch a moment. I do agree that "Not purposefully, but not by accident." is a bit of a problem line. If nothing else, I think you would need to use purposely rather than purposefully for a better antonym to accident. At least if you were going for juxtaposition in that line, and not something bigger that I missed.
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Collarbones - by Tdurr - 05-20-2014, 04:53 AM
RE: Collarbones - by rowens - 05-20-2014, 05:06 AM
RE: Collarbones - by allthingsworthy - 05-20-2014, 08:48 AM
RE: Collarbones - by Markworth - 05-20-2014, 09:49 AM
RE: Collarbones - by Tdurr - 05-20-2014, 11:35 AM
RE: Collarbones - by Tiger the Lion - 05-21-2014, 11:43 AM



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