05-21-2014, 09:03 AM
It's something in the field of epiphanic disillusionment. It's very low key though, unlike other poetic works of youthful failure.
The third stanza has some of the best stuff. But instead of just talking like this poem does, you can add some action, add a character that's realizing things and doing things. Instead of just talking.
The third stanza has some of the best stuff. But instead of just talking like this poem does, you can add some action, add a character that's realizing things and doing things. Instead of just talking.