Bifurcation
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(04-24-2014, 10:58 AM)expiring_touch Wrote:  On this night I sit
in the back alley of dreams, of two-some minds Does this mean that someone is undecided? Being of 'two minds'? Or is it referencing two different people.
in mid-spring bloom - right now I don't see why this phrase is necessary.
when we none of us can fail or care
to know the future.
a nice attempt to capture the nostalgia of careless times.
I knew your face before, it sang
beneath the shades of unsung trees
etched on my life line –
eyes for embers and mouth for mirror
covered with black velvet. - a metaphor for night?
I started like a bird this night, a cooling drift
across my midriff; and all that was,
was fair, we've come
full circle.
It was challenging to decipher some of this poem, but I get the feeling that it's about the reflection of one person on times past.
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Bifurcation - by expiring_touch - 04-24-2014, 10:58 AM
RE: Bifurcation - by Mopkins - 04-24-2014, 11:31 PM
RE: Bifurcation - by ChristopherSea - 04-25-2014, 12:09 AM
RE: Bifurcation - by benno_422 - 05-08-2014, 08:02 PM
RE: Bifurcation - by Erthona - 05-08-2014, 09:47 PM
RE: Bifurcation - by LorettaYoung - 05-11-2014, 11:26 PM
RE: Bifurcation - by Kaldwin - 05-18-2014, 09:09 PM
RE: Bifurcation - by abu nuwas - 05-18-2014, 10:21 PM
RE: Bifurcation - by QDeathstar - 05-24-2014, 12:48 PM



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