05-15-2014, 03:29 AM
(05-12-2014, 11:24 PM)SuicidalBlueJay Wrote: hahaha alright. It's true. I realize it's not very original. But I think it can still be beautiful. Why? Have you heard of "New Sincerity"? It's the idea that the sincerity of the art/poetry is beautiful, not how skillful or original it is trying to be. I'm displaying my real emotions, even if that means using cliches. Were all human
But you're right. I don't want to cop out with an excuse like that! I should read more poetry :3
Sincerity of of great value; but not an art. These are well spoken sincere words but childish as a poem; although I do hear a fairly distinctive beat; despite my agreement with the experts (which I am not), I think you should continue; expand your vocabulary. Best to you. Loretta