I Cede You Peace by Loretta Young
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hi Loretta,

after reading the poem the feedback and the revision i think leanne made a great choice.
you show that a workshop environment can be beneficial to poet, critic and reader alike.
what's extra special is the fact you're a newb, or at least an ex newb. you not only show it can be done,
you show it in the best way possible. nicely done. >Big Grin<

also thumbs up the critics colons, one and all Hysterical
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I Cede You Peace by Loretta Young - by Leanne - 05-14-2014, 08:33 AM
RE: I Cede You Peace by Loretta Young - by Leanne - 05-14-2014, 08:51 AM
RE: I Cede You Peace by Loretta Young - by Leanne - 05-14-2014, 08:54 AM
RE: I Cede You Peace by Loretta Young - by tectak - 05-14-2014, 09:28 PM
RE: I Cede You Peace by Loretta Young - by billy - 05-14-2014, 11:04 AM
RE: I Cede You Peace by Loretta Young - by Todd - 05-14-2014, 08:05 PM
RE: I Cede You Peace by Loretta Young - by tectak - 05-14-2014, 09:57 PM



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