05-14-2014, 08:51 AM
This excellent example of workshopping in the Novice thread can be found here. Thank you to Loretta for a terrific attitude towards workshopping, and to all who commented for their supportive and insightful suggestions.
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Yes -she has taken what she felt right, and left what felt wrong (even my suggested colon
). Full marks!
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Yes -she has taken what she felt right, and left what felt wrong (even my suggested colon
). Full marks!