All Alone
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Welcome to the realm of poetry. The best advice for newcomers is to focus on imagery. ‘The night is silent as stone’ is where this poem begins and ends for me. I would rebuild the poem around that line accordingly. Good luck with it./Chris
My new watercolor: 'Nightmare After Christmas'/Chris
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All Alone - by SuicidalBlueJay - 05-12-2014, 10:52 PM
RE: All Alone - by tectak - 05-12-2014, 11:14 PM
RE: All Alone - by SuicidalBlueJay - 05-12-2014, 11:24 PM
RE: All Alone - by LorettaYoung - 05-15-2014, 03:29 AM
RE: All Alone - by tectak - 05-13-2014, 12:06 AM
RE: All Alone - by Thoughtjotter - 05-13-2014, 05:25 AM
RE: All Alone - by tectak - 05-13-2014, 06:42 AM
RE: All Alone - by billy - 05-13-2014, 08:09 AM
RE: All Alone - by Todd - 05-13-2014, 11:00 AM
RE: All Alone - by SuicidalBlueJay - 05-13-2014, 11:34 AM
RE: All Alone - by nb - 05-13-2014, 09:24 PM
RE: All Alone - by ChristopherSea - 05-13-2014, 09:46 PM
RE: All Alone - by Leanne - 05-14-2014, 04:54 AM
RE: All Alone - by Babeanew - 05-14-2014, 07:27 AM
RE: All Alone - by Keith - 05-14-2014, 07:41 AM
RE: All Alone - by abu nuwas - 05-14-2014, 08:30 AM
RE: All Alone - by MT-EMPTY - 06-01-2014, 03:34 AM
RE: All Alone - by QDeathstar - 06-01-2014, 03:54 AM



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