05-13-2014, 10:01 AM
this is turning into more of a discussion than feedback but i'm afraid originality will usually trump your cliche. sincerity is not carried on the back of cliche, how can a poet be or seem to be sincere if they simply repeat what a hundred other poets have said. so no, i'm sorry but i don't get your idea. and i don't get how not liking cliche is elitist.
in truth and outside all the cliche you use, the poem isn't well written and carries little if any sincerity. by all means stick to your guns because i could be wrong and it could be a great and sincere poem despite what i say.
thanks for the read.
in truth and outside all the cliche you use, the poem isn't well written and carries little if any sincerity. by all means stick to your guns because i could be wrong and it could be a great and sincere poem despite what i say.
thanks for the read.