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I didn't look through all of this to know what has been said, but would you consider using "come" instead of "flow". "...the words just come." I don't know if it is just on this site or other places, but "flow" seems to be overused. Plus it creates some nice alliteration.


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control - by RSaba - 05-12-2014, 12:55 AM
RE: control - by Brownlie - 05-12-2014, 02:13 AM
RE: control - by rowens - 05-12-2014, 06:19 AM
RE: control - by RSaba - 05-12-2014, 06:59 AM
RE: control - by Brownlie - 05-12-2014, 07:05 AM
RE: control - by 71degrees - 05-12-2014, 07:39 AM
RE: control - by RSaba - 05-12-2014, 07:45 AM
RE: control - by ChristopherSea - 05-13-2014, 01:05 AM
RE: control - by Todd - 05-13-2014, 01:05 AM
RE: control - by RSaba - 05-13-2014, 04:23 AM
RE: control - by Erthona - 05-13-2014, 05:18 AM



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