The Fires of Two

[SuicidalBlueJay]

inThe Fires of two

Two fires drawing near
a tender kiss behind the ear
melting into grasping feel
fuel the fires growing dear
which now embrace exotic rhymes
roaring flames that intertwine
effortless and sublime
one in space and one in time

smiles, laughing wiles
unwanted limits defiled
then, i would unzip your trousers
and in your groin plant fragrant flowers
blossoms of wet honey
full of fire, passions and desires
by whimsy, wanting your power

I remember that shower
deep within and wet,
no man made barriers set
we rode the ferris wheel
you behind me on the carousel
heavenly fire we did steal,

The fires of two
consumed together
endure then
reluctant surrender
as slight the dying embers
on the cold stone floor

the temporal of such we find
and that with tears
we leave behind
although sublime
a moment of that open door
is now but dust
on a cold stone floor

Wow. That was beautiful. Uhhh, I don't feel that I'm qualified to critique this poem... as I'm just a novice. But what can I say? Hmm.. the last two stanzas (if thats the right word?) both end with "cold stone floor"?

I dun know, maybe it takes away from the ending a little? take with a grain of salt...