control
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2:50 a.m. and the words just flow
crookedly, but at least they're there

crookedly is an interesting word. It can mean so many things at once. Crooked. It says a lot, but sometimes occurs to you too simply.

and i bow down to the darkness

But crookedly and bow down are nice together.


for giving me some semblance
of light

in the form of letters, perhaps
but still, something shines
at this time of the night
or the morning
, the power

Those parts stand out and work.


of being there when the numbers change
it feels like control
2:52 a.m. and the words just dance
and i am a puppeteer

The control is crooked. It has a charm.
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Messages In This Thread
control - by RSaba - 05-12-2014, 12:55 AM
RE: control - by Brownlie - 05-12-2014, 02:13 AM
RE: control - by rowens - 05-12-2014, 06:19 AM
RE: control - by RSaba - 05-12-2014, 06:59 AM
RE: control - by Brownlie - 05-12-2014, 07:05 AM
RE: control - by 71degrees - 05-12-2014, 07:39 AM
RE: control - by RSaba - 05-12-2014, 07:45 AM
RE: control - by ChristopherSea - 05-13-2014, 01:05 AM
RE: control - by Todd - 05-13-2014, 01:05 AM
RE: control - by RSaba - 05-13-2014, 04:23 AM
RE: control - by Erthona - 05-13-2014, 05:18 AM



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