05-11-2014, 04:25 PM
This starts with sort of a cadence and some incidental rhyme, but the cadence drops off after the fist third. Aside from those things, there is not much that is poetic, as the bottom half reads like a droning rant. ending on a question, not usually a good sign.
Best,
Dale
Best,
Dale
How long after picking up the brush, the first masterpiece?
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.