Delusions
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(05-11-2014, 07:20 AM)popeye Wrote:  
(05-11-2014, 06:53 AM)Brownlie Wrote:  I’ve heard a corpse-less song tonight
A soothing sibilant
That hisses hosts of specious tunes
In winding assonance

A natal shadow’s whisper births
Away a formless stiff
Instilling life with breathless shocks
Presenting me with glyphs

A godly slate for babbling names
From restless dins inside
A laughing gift from clouds above
To tell me I’m confined.

The fatherstuff was but a sham
To mock my potent mold
That coyly takes deluded hopes
In spoken words untold

I cast Mesmeric waves adrift
Creating pasts anew
As jibes forgotten long ago
Remembered now askew.

A player in my riven mind
Recites the clips gone past
And builds them all anew to sell
A pilfered word recast


What cause is there for risen ghosts?
That dance a holy mask
Of posted Lutheran whims obscured
To harden me at last.


A top write
Brownlie and the first two stanzas sound extra good when read out loud. well done. I enjoyed it very much, cheers. Smile
Thanks for reading.
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Messages In This Thread
Delusions - by Brownlie - 05-11-2014, 06:53 AM
RE: Delusions - by popeye - 05-11-2014, 07:20 AM
RE: Delusions - by Brownlie - 05-11-2014, 07:38 AM
RE: Delusions - by Erthona - 05-11-2014, 10:49 AM
RE: Delusions - by Brownlie - 05-11-2014, 11:07 AM
RE: Delusions - by Erthona - 05-11-2014, 12:18 PM
RE: Delusions - by Brownlie - 05-11-2014, 12:26 PM
RE: Delusions - by SilverMire - 05-11-2014, 02:41 PM
RE: Delusions - by Brownlie - 05-11-2014, 04:30 PM



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