Description vs Presentation
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In order to more thoroughly eschew the rhetorical (Smile), you'll find Hayakawa's Ladder of Abstraction very useful. Essentially, the most successful writers tend to draw heavily from the lower levels:-

Quote:Level 4: ABSTRACTIONS
Eg. beauty, love, life, time, success, power, happiness, faith, hope, charity, evil, good

Level 3: NOUN CLASSES -- BROAD GROUP NAMES WITH LITTLE SPECIFICATION
Eg. people, men, women, young people, everybody, nobody, industry, we, goals, things, television

Level 2: NOUN CATEGORIES -- MORE DEFINITE GROUPS
Eg. teenagers, middle class, clothing industry, parents, college campus, newborn child, TV comedies, house plants

Level 1: SPECIFIC, IDENTIFIABLE NOUNS
Eg. My blue Levi 501s, Skittles commercials, mum's philodendron, my new baby sister Frogbottom
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Description vs Presentation - by tomoffing - 05-10-2014, 03:49 PM
RE: Description vs Presentation - by billy - 05-10-2014, 04:43 PM
RE: Description vs Presentation - by tomoffing - 05-10-2014, 05:42 PM
RE: Description vs Presentation - by Leanne - 05-10-2014, 05:47 PM
RE: Description vs Presentation - by billy - 05-10-2014, 05:55 PM
RE: Description vs Presentation - by ellajam - 05-10-2014, 06:54 PM
RE: Description vs Presentation - by milo - 05-10-2014, 10:48 PM
RE: Description vs Presentation - by abu nuwas - 05-11-2014, 02:42 AM
RE: Description vs Presentation - by rayheinrich - 05-11-2014, 07:06 AM
RE: Description vs Presentation - by Leanne - 05-11-2014, 07:31 AM
RE: Description vs Presentation - by rayheinrich - 05-11-2014, 08:11 AM
RE: Description vs Presentation - by trueenigma - 05-11-2014, 08:16 AM
RE: Description vs Presentation - by rowens - 05-12-2014, 07:09 AM
RE: Description vs Presentation - by rayheinrich - 05-12-2014, 04:43 PM



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