Me

[Wjames]

Obviously the "me?" refrain is the whole theme of the poem, but I find it disrupts the flow of the poem, and makes it difficult to read. Poems like this seem better suited to spoken word, with the readers energy bringing it alive. One concrete suggestion I have would be to change the last line to:

Probably because of...

and let the reader add "me" in their head. That's how I would end it if it were my poem, but it's obviously yours to do with as you'd like.