05-10-2014, 02:58 PM
Eugene,
Site promotion is frowned upon, so I wouldn't do that in the future.
Your poem uses rhyme well, but there is a lot of repetition that really doesn't do much for it, especially all the "me?".
Welcome to the site.
Dale
Site promotion is frowned upon, so I wouldn't do that in the future.
Your poem uses rhyme well, but there is a lot of repetition that really doesn't do much for it, especially all the "me?".
Welcome to the site.
Dale
How long after picking up the brush, the first masterpiece?
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.