Your Touch
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HH,

Could you ease up on the bold. I passed on another of your poems because of it. It is distracting and for me anyways makes the poem difficult to read.

Thanks,


Dale
How long after picking up the brush, the first masterpiece?

The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.
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Your Touch - by Namyh - 05-10-2014, 08:26 AM
RE: Your Touch - by Erthona - 05-10-2014, 01:50 PM
RE: Your Touch - by Namyh - 05-10-2014, 02:47 PM



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