For Critique

[Brownlie]

Thank you for reading, the poem is certainly of the mish-mash variety. I had originally titled it The Courtier, because it was supposed to indicate that grandiose style that a member of the courts would attempt. The dog would be the representation of death in Paradise Lost which is a literal interpretation of the fear that the body will be defiled upon death. But, enough of that I retitled it For Critique because I didn't know what to do with this mish mash of lines.