Metric Angst
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I want to write a gothic poem
in iambic pentacles
although a foot has been chewed off
by something black with tentacles

Tear me a dactyl now, take me and teach me how
I shall be broken by devilish rhymes
make me a sacrifice, wake me up, treat me nice
I have lived through this pain thousands of times

Take my head and mount it as your
trochee, beating down the thunder
rising from my harried heartbeat
once a rock to shelter under

With a sly anapaest you must fail rhythm tests
while your brain seeks a regular beat
ev’ry stumble, ev’ry tumble, ev’ry small erratic rumble
all comes back to those same fucking feet!
It could be worse
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Messages In This Thread
Metric Angst - by Leanne - 05-09-2014, 03:38 PM
RE: Metric Angst - by billy - 05-09-2014, 04:09 PM
RE: Metric Angst - by crow - 05-09-2014, 04:46 PM
RE: Metric Angst - by Leanne - 05-09-2014, 04:52 PM
RE: Metric Angst - by ellajam - 05-09-2014, 07:13 PM
RE: Metric Angst - by ChristopherSea - 05-09-2014, 08:01 PM
RE: Metric Angst - by Leanne - 05-09-2014, 08:04 PM
RE: Metric Angst - by ellajam - 05-09-2014, 08:13 PM
RE: Metric Angst - by milo - 05-09-2014, 09:42 PM



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