Four-o-clocks - edited
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Marianne,

That's pretty good. I like how you re-worked S3, putting in "like my love" for clarity. Yeah, much better, cleaner. I didn't know that about those flowers. When flowers here turn brown they are generally wilting.

Dale
How long after picking up the brush, the first masterpiece?

The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.
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Four-o-clocks - edited - by Mopkins - 05-08-2014, 12:42 PM
RE: Four-o-clocks - by Erthona - 05-08-2014, 01:23 PM
RE: Four-o-clocks - by Mopkins - 05-08-2014, 05:13 PM
RE: Four-o-clocks - by Bunx - 05-09-2014, 02:45 AM
RE: Four-o-clocks - edited - by Mopkins - 05-09-2014, 08:52 AM
RE: Four-o-clocks - edited - by Erthona - 05-09-2014, 09:58 AM
RE: Four-o-clocks - edited - by Mopkins - 05-09-2014, 10:20 AM
RE: Four-o-clocks - edited - by billy - 05-09-2014, 10:27 AM
RE: Four-o-clocks - edited - by Mopkins - 05-09-2014, 10:36 AM
RE: Four-o-clocks - edited - by Mopkins - 05-10-2014, 09:38 AM



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