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Four-o-clocks - edited
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05-09-2014, 08:52 AM
hi Fogglethorpe & Bunx, thanks for reading and commenting. I've done away with the last stanza as suggested, though the third is now different, to bring in the idea of re-sprouting love, which is the note I wanted the poem to end on. Hopefully, it's now in better shape. Cheers
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Four-o-clocks - edited - by Mopkins - 05-08-2014, 12:42 PM
RE: Four-o-clocks - by Erthona - 05-08-2014, 01:23 PM
RE: Four-o-clocks - by Mopkins - 05-08-2014, 05:13 PM
RE: Four-o-clocks - by Bunx - 05-09-2014, 02:45 AM
RE: Four-o-clocks - edited - by Mopkins - 05-09-2014, 08:52 AM
RE: Four-o-clocks - edited - by Erthona - 05-09-2014, 09:58 AM
RE: Four-o-clocks - edited - by Mopkins - 05-09-2014, 10:20 AM
RE: Four-o-clocks - edited - by billy - 05-09-2014, 10:27 AM
RE: Four-o-clocks - edited - by Mopkins - 05-09-2014, 10:36 AM
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