05-09-2014, 07:57 AM
I hear a good deal of laying-down of rules, but you asked for opinion, and you have it. For some reason, I find your posts uncomfortable; it may be me. But what seems to happen, is that you end up quoting yourself. Surely, if you have a general problem, it would be better to express it in general terms, and if examples are useful, find them in the poems of well-known writers, or people posting here. Then when your problem is resolved in general, you can apply what you have learnt to your own work.
You put up something with an anapaest among the iambs. Milo told you he didn't think this a good trick. You then mysteriously laid your hand on exactly the same stuff, from Frost. You seem satisfied with the answers to your own questions. But it may just be me, of course. No need to reply.
You put up something with an anapaest among the iambs. Milo told you he didn't think this a good trick. You then mysteriously laid your hand on exactly the same stuff, from Frost. You seem satisfied with the answers to your own questions. But it may just be me, of course. No need to reply.