For Critique

[Brownlie]

Brownlie..I appreciate the attention to craft in this piece. I am old school, so the perfect iambic tetrameter/iambic trimeter quatrains are very appealing to me. It has a classic vibe throughout.

I will admit, the theme is a bit oblique..but a little mystique is ok with me. I get the sense the narrator is speaking from the grave.

Overall, a fine poem.

Thanks for the read. I appreciate it.