The Wild Wind

[milo]

Milo with agree I, sure for, sense it plenty makes!

elad

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I see your point; you make it sound rather silly; but language can get boring, in it's usual sense, I've read poetry like that; it's just like someone would speak it, but i will really think about it; perhaps there is a better way. Thank you again, Loretta

If language gets boring than we have much larger concerns but as for the inversions, what were you hoping to accomplish by including them in this poem?