Jazz

[ChristopherSea]

I think you need to change that first line to properly set the tone to perhaps, ...mid afternoon the improvisation commences... or something of that nature to begin your jam session. See what you think. I am not sure what a wishing bone is unless you mean wishbone. I think you have a typo and mean 'viscous' (slow moving, syrupy) in your close. What happened to the crescendo of rush hour? You know, milk the jazz song/city metaphor. All the best on your next edit./Chris