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Burn
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05-05-2014, 11:11 AM
A lot's already said in this thread. I don't have a problem with "Nothing is like a fire burning in the night", but i want to know why this is such a singular event for the narrator. Are they an arsonist? The rest seems pretty unrelated to a fire burning at night. Why is this about fire at night? Capture that experience and leave the rest out.
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Burn - by moniker - 04-29-2014, 10:27 AM
RE: Burn - by George - 04-30-2014, 10:11 AM
RE: Burn - by moniker - 05-01-2014, 06:02 AM
RE: Burn - by bbcashdollar - 05-05-2014, 11:11 AM
RE: Burn - by ChristopherSea - 05-05-2014, 07:51 PM
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