05-04-2014, 10:36 AM
Thank you. Yes the meter is off, as this is accentual verse, which only counts the stressed syllables, in this case 4 per line...or should be. It's not much in the way of poetry, more of a nursery rhyme. A simple poem for a simpler time, or so we tend to think of it 
Thanks again,
Dale
Thanks again,
Dale
How long after picking up the brush, the first masterpiece?
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.