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[billy]

hi tony. not sure the first line works too well as the 2nd sort of contradicts it. i'd suggest starting on the 2nd line. it was hard for me to make darkness groan in the context given.

thanks for the read.

I don't feel that I exist
I feel like the slipped disc of a
solar eclipse
But because the darkness groans like someone left too long alone,
I feel the painful sting
which means, alas,
that I persist

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i forgot to add...give it a title specially with such a short poem,