Dancing Round The Supermarket

Dancing Round The Supermarket

Magpie Offline

Metavariable loon, sir.

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05-03-2014, 09:55 AM

Marianne, AJ, John Galt, Billy and Keith,
thank you for all taking the time to read and comment on this poem, it is much appreciated. I have done a slight edit regarding the fourth stanza which AJ correctly pointed out affected the pace of the whole "dance" aspect of the poem.
Thank you for that AJ, I will always welcome crit regardless of which forum it is.

wae aye man ye radgie

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Dancing Round The Supermarket - by Magpie - 05-02-2014, 09:57 AM

RE: Dancing Round The Supermarket - by Mopkins - 05-02-2014, 03:28 PM

RE: Dancing Round The Supermarket - by cidermaid - 05-02-2014, 03:55 PM

RE: Dancing Round The Supermarket - by John Galt - 05-02-2014, 04:11 PM

RE: Dancing Round The Supermarket - by billy - 05-02-2014, 04:32 PM

RE: Dancing Round The Supermarket - by Keith - 05-03-2014, 06:46 AM

RE: Dancing Round The Supermarket - by Magpie - 05-03-2014, 09:55 AM

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