Dancing Round The Supermarket

[cidermaid]

Hi Mark, This was fun to read and has a real life image that is readily identifiable. (I Know this is a not crit thread but just to mention:- I feel the 4th "perhaps" stanza slowed it down a bit too much and took away from the sense of the dance, I think you could just keep the last line as a sort of pause in the dance. Just a random thought though) Nice poem.