NaPM April 17 2014
#20
(04-29-2014, 02:58 AM)jacobfionn Wrote:  Like a half smile
or a cigarette in the week
I loved you discreetly
so I thought away
my reasoning
so to speak

We met so quickly and there it was
the lightness of the feet
I spent a fortune on wistfulness
and then it was complete

those words you spun
made your mark
like a rainbows soft deceit
I left my heart at the door
for that easy bitter-sweet

You were so much better than me
I thought you smiled in your sleep
brooding i've forgotten how
even you dear weep
Greetings Jacob, it's nice to see a new face jumping right in. Welcome to the site and National Poetry Month. Cheers/Chris
My new watercolor: 'Nightmare After Christmas'/Chris
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NaPM April 17 2014 - by milo - 04-17-2014, 10:06 PM
RE: NaPM April 17 2014 - by Erthona - 04-18-2014, 02:46 AM
RE: NaPM April 17 2014 - by Brownlie - 04-18-2014, 03:07 AM
RE: NaPM April 17 2014 - by ChristopherSea - 04-18-2014, 04:35 AM
RE: NaPM April 17 2014 - by cidermaid - 04-18-2014, 07:02 PM
RE: NaPM April 17 2014 - by ellajam - 04-18-2014, 07:05 PM
RE: NaPM April 17 2014 - by ChristopherSea - 04-18-2014, 09:01 PM
RE: NaPM April 17 2014 - by cidermaid - 04-18-2014, 09:41 PM
RE: NaPM April 17 2014 - by ChristopherSea - 04-18-2014, 09:53 PM
RE: NaPM April 17 2014 - by Mopkins - 04-19-2014, 12:40 AM
RE: NaPM April 17 2014 - by Keith - 04-22-2014, 09:26 PM
RE: NaPM April 17 2014 - by cidermaid - 04-23-2014, 03:18 AM
RE: NaPM April 17 2014 - by Keith - 04-23-2014, 03:37 AM
RE: NaPM April 17 2014 - by fim - 04-27-2014, 12:14 PM
RE: NaPM April 17 2014 - by ellajam - 04-28-2014, 10:16 PM
RE: NaPM April 17 2014 - by ChristopherSea - 04-28-2014, 10:57 PM
RE: NaPM April 17 2014 - by fim - 04-29-2014, 02:05 AM
RE: NaPM April 17 2014 - by ellajam - 04-29-2014, 02:19 AM
RE: NaPM April 17 2014 - by jacobfionn - 04-29-2014, 02:58 AM
RE: NaPM April 17 2014 - by ChristopherSea - 04-29-2014, 08:55 PM



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