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Entitled #1 (and his Realtime Monologue)
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04-29-2014, 12:26 PM
I also like the imagery and the feel of the poem. Even though I don't really understand its message (or if it even has one), I don't think it matter for this poem, it stands well enough purely on its words. I would change the sur-round part though, that seems a bit odd and doesn't do anything for the poem.
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Entitled #1 (and his Realtime Monologue) - by SilverMire - 04-28-2014, 12:09 PM
RE: The Sole Traders - by RiverNotch - 04-28-2014, 09:04 PM
RE: The Sole Traders - by ChristopherSea - 04-28-2014, 09:20 PM
RE: The Sole Traders - by tectak - 04-28-2014, 09:46 PM
RE: The Sole Traders - by Willpark - 04-29-2014, 12:26 PM
RE: The Sole Traders V2 (Untitled) - by SilverMire - 05-02-2014, 08:37 PM
RE: The Sole Traders V2 (Untitled) - by ChristopherSea - 05-02-2014, 08:46 PM
RE: The Sole Traders V2 (Untitled) - by tectak - 05-02-2014, 09:48 PM
RE: The Sole Traders V2 (Untitled) - by SilverMire - 05-03-2014, 03:10 PM
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