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NaPM April 17 2014
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04-29-2014, 02:19 AM
fim, the 2nd title midway through made it look like two distinctly different poems to me, even though the first was obviously a prelude to the second. They might work as one, maybe you'll decide to workshop it.
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NaPM April 17 2014 - by milo - 04-17-2014, 10:06 PM
RE: NaPM April 17 2014 - by Erthona - 04-18-2014, 02:46 AM
RE: NaPM April 17 2014 - by Brownlie - 04-18-2014, 03:07 AM
RE: NaPM April 17 2014 - by ChristopherSea - 04-18-2014, 04:35 AM
RE: NaPM April 17 2014 - by cidermaid - 04-18-2014, 07:02 PM
RE: NaPM April 17 2014 - by ellajam - 04-18-2014, 07:05 PM
RE: NaPM April 17 2014 - by ChristopherSea - 04-18-2014, 09:01 PM
RE: NaPM April 17 2014 - by cidermaid - 04-18-2014, 09:41 PM
RE: NaPM April 17 2014 - by ChristopherSea - 04-18-2014, 09:53 PM
RE: NaPM April 17 2014 - by Mopkins - 04-19-2014, 12:40 AM
RE: NaPM April 17 2014 - by Keith - 04-22-2014, 09:26 PM
RE: NaPM April 17 2014 - by cidermaid - 04-23-2014, 03:18 AM
RE: NaPM April 17 2014 - by Keith - 04-23-2014, 03:37 AM
RE: NaPM April 17 2014 - by fim - 04-27-2014, 12:14 PM
RE: NaPM April 17 2014 - by ellajam - 04-28-2014, 10:16 PM
RE: NaPM April 17 2014 - by ChristopherSea - 04-28-2014, 10:57 PM
RE: NaPM April 17 2014 - by fim - 04-29-2014, 02:05 AM
RE: NaPM April 17 2014 - by ellajam - 04-29-2014, 02:19 AM
RE: NaPM April 17 2014 - by jacobfionn - 04-29-2014, 02:58 AM
RE: NaPM April 17 2014 - by ChristopherSea - 04-29-2014, 08:55 PM
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