violent sunrise on the island
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Minor details are important even if they're unconscious and very, very minor.

All the me me me, especially since they often work in a rhyme here, can make or break the poem. But I guess it depends on who's reading it.

The small i paired with all the me me me, as well as some other things going on in the poem, may seem like a silly psychoanalytic reading and maybe it is, but all details are worth considering when making a poem. Even if they don't go far.
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violent sunrise on the island - by RSaba - 04-25-2014, 03:53 PM
RE: violent sunrise on the island - by billy - 04-25-2014, 04:36 PM
RE: violent sunrise on the island - by Brownlie - 04-25-2014, 04:58 PM
RE: violent sunrise on the island - by tectak - 04-26-2014, 01:21 AM
RE: violent sunrise on the island - by RSaba - 04-26-2014, 02:42 AM
RE: violent sunrise on the island - by rowens - 04-26-2014, 03:04 AM
RE: violent sunrise on the island - by John Galt - 04-26-2014, 04:43 AM
RE: violent sunrise on the island - by RSaba - 04-26-2014, 06:23 AM
RE: violent sunrise on the island - by rowens - 04-26-2014, 08:26 AM
RE: violent sunrise on the island - by Wjames - 04-29-2014, 09:31 AM
RE: violent sunrise on the island - by billy - 04-29-2014, 09:42 AM
RE: violent sunrise on the island - by RSaba - 04-29-2014, 11:18 AM



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