04-25-2014, 06:32 PM
Lovely poem. Wish you could change the title to something more sensual. What do you think?Shenaz, you can do better than this. Don't let yourself down
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Bi aori adan fi sebo, ao lo obe
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I Wished I Was The Water -edited - by Mopkins - 04-06-2014, 07:44 PM
RE: The Shower - by ellajam - 04-06-2014, 10:15 PM
RE: The Shower - by Mopkins - 04-06-2014, 10:36 PM
RE: The Shower - by Thoughtjotter - 04-07-2014, 03:07 AM
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RE: The Shower - by Thoughtjotter - 04-07-2014, 05:10 AM
RE: The Shower - by California - 04-07-2014, 08:00 PM
RE: The Shower - by Mopkins - 04-07-2014, 08:47 PM
RE: The Shower - by California - 04-07-2014, 08:55 PM
RE: The Shower - by Mopkins - 04-07-2014, 09:04 PM
RE: The Shower - by Erthona - 04-07-2014, 10:33 PM
RE: The Shower - by kindofahippy - 04-07-2014, 10:47 PM
RE: The Shower - by Mopkins - 04-07-2014, 11:04 PM
RE: The Shower - by kindofahippy - 04-08-2014, 12:01 AM
RE: The Shower - by Mopkins - 04-08-2014, 12:19 AM
RE: The Shower -edited - by Mopkins - 04-25-2014, 02:24 PM
RE: The Shower -edited - by billy - 04-25-2014, 05:19 PM
RE: I Wished I Was The Water -edited - by Gestalt222 - 04-26-2014, 01:34 AM
RE: The Shower -edited - by Mopkins - 04-25-2014, 05:33 PM
RE: The Shower -edited - by shenaz - 04-25-2014, 06:32 PM
RE: The Shower -edited - by Mopkins - 04-25-2014, 06:37 PM
RE: I Wished I Was The Water -edited - by Mopkins - 04-26-2014, 01:08 PM
RE: I Wished I Was The Water -edited - by aerickson - 04-30-2014, 01:57 AM
RE: I Wished I Was The Water -edited - by Mopkins - 04-30-2014, 12:38 PM
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