04-24-2014, 11:34 AM
Don't judge me....it's been a long day, I am a man, and it's been a long day. But the title finally hit me haha. At first, I thought this was some series you have been doing but I get it now. I agree with Mark......with the frankness of the second line, crimson seems a bit too subtle. If your goal was to shock the reader a bit by the second line, then please get your time card and clock out because you did well haha. Nevertheless, a funny, whimsical haiku.
P.S. Being raised by a single mom and having three sisters, I have learned that there is nothing that chocolate cannot remedy.
Best,
Cameron
P.S. Being raised by a single mom and having three sisters, I have learned that there is nothing that chocolate cannot remedy.
Best,
Cameron

