Monthly Haiku
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Don't judge me....it's been a long day, I am a man, and it's been a long day. But the title finally hit me haha. At first, I thought this was some series you have been doing but I get it now. I agree with Mark......with the frankness of the second line, crimson seems a bit too subtle. If your goal was to shock the reader a bit by the second line, then please get your time card and clock out because you did well haha. Nevertheless, a funny, whimsical haiku.

P.S. Being raised by a single mom and having three sisters, I have learned that there is nothing that chocolate cannot remedy.

Best,

Cameron
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Monthly Haiku - by painter not a poet - 04-24-2014, 03:18 AM
RE: Monthly Haiku - by Magpie - 04-24-2014, 08:30 AM
RE: Monthly Haiku - by painter not a poet - 04-25-2014, 01:15 AM
RE: Monthly Haiku - by TheDoctorCam - 04-24-2014, 11:34 AM
RE: Monthly Haiku - by ChristopherSea - 04-24-2014, 08:38 PM



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