Lull
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The poem flows effortlessly and the imagery is pleasant but the connects between each concept is completely lost on me after several reads. Perhaps more clues would make the poem stronger.
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Lull - by crow - 04-15-2014, 05:37 PM
RE: Lull - by Erthona - 04-16-2014, 09:34 AM
RE: Lull - by kindofahippy - 04-16-2014, 12:00 PM
RE: Lull - by Stephanie - 04-16-2014, 02:47 PM
RE: Lull - by crow - 04-16-2014, 06:45 PM
RE: Lull - by RSaba - 04-19-2014, 06:28 AM
RE: Lull - by Namyh - 04-20-2014, 01:59 AM
RE: Lull - by Gestalt222 - 04-23-2014, 06:55 AM
RE: Lull - by tomoffing - 04-23-2014, 08:23 AM
RE: Lull - by crow - 04-23-2014, 11:05 AM
RE: Lull - by tectak - 04-23-2014, 11:22 PM



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