04-23-2014, 06:42 AM
Hi George,
I also think it made sense until 'boy's mom',
- Tall falling snow slices
like a blunt knife,
under the bright shadows
of the stars’ flash –
This part is conceptually going somewhere. I think you should give it a try, and see where it leads you.
cheers.
I also think it made sense until 'boy's mom',
- Tall falling snow slices
like a blunt knife,
under the bright shadows
of the stars’ flash –
This part is conceptually going somewhere. I think you should give it a try, and see where it leads you.
cheers.