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God is Dead

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04-23-2014, 05:43 AM

(04-19-2014, 11:19 AM)Am I A Poet? Wrote: Short little verse borrowing influence heavily from Nietzsche's Parable of the Madman. Hope you enjoy

That daytime rebel holding lantern bright
Is not so mad as first he may appear.
The hidden Future still could prove him right,
Now God is Dead and nought but Chance is here.

I like this a lot. Good flow and sound and interesting. But it definitely is a lot of 'telling' and using a bit more description and imagery might help.

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God is Dead - by Am I A Poet? - 04-19-2014, 11:19 AM

RE: God is Dead - by Erthona - 04-19-2014, 11:35 AM

RE: God is Dead - by AnywherebutHere - 04-20-2014, 12:38 PM

RE: God is Dead - by alatos - 04-20-2014, 11:48 PM

RE: God is Dead - by Nbafan - 04-23-2014, 05:43 AM

RE: God is Dead - by Erthona - 04-23-2014, 01:24 PM

RE: God is Dead - by ChristopherSea - 04-23-2014, 07:59 PM

RE: God is Dead - by RiverNotch - 04-28-2014, 09:56 PM

RE: God is Dead - by ChristopherSea - 04-28-2014, 10:06 PM

RE: God is Dead - by RiverNotch - 04-28-2014, 10:27 PM

RE: God is Dead - by milo - 04-28-2014, 10:34 PM

RE: God is Dead - by ChristopherSea - 04-28-2014, 10:55 PM

RE: God is Dead - by rowens - 04-24-2014, 12:37 AM

RE: God is Dead - by Willpark - 04-28-2014, 11:26 AM

RE: God is Dead - by RiverNotch - 04-28-2014, 10:39 PM

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