Unicorn

[painter not a poet]

hello

don't usually comment on unrhymed stuff, so all I'll say is that gentile seems wrong and gentle seems better to me- probably just a typo.

Welcome to the site

Thank you, yes it was a typo, and sadly one that spell checker wouldn't have picked up. But thank you for your keen eye.

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I like this piece. Nice mixture of beauty and pain...those existential realities that make us human.

Thank you for reading. I agree with you, it is the bittersweet things that do make us human.