Deftly, and Soon

[Stephanie]

I found the description of the snow breathtaking here. It made me think of my Grandmother's house which had a lovely big garden with a bird table in it for some reason. I did not expect the ending either. I like also the idea of their being no full stop at the end - it's like an open ending, we have to image the rest of it. It's a very sad poem. Sorry nothing helpful to add because I just really liked it.