The Mood Swing
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This line is self contradictory "festooned with hate mail" and again "swaddled in discomfiture"

Sorry, but this isn't really worth my time parsing through. I mean what does "scarcity
vanishing on a dime by spears of temperature" mean? Nothing as far as I can tell, which falls in line with the rest of the piece.

Best,

Dale
How long after picking up the brush, the first masterpiece?

The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.
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The Mood Swing - by poe - 04-19-2014, 08:42 AM
RE: The Mood Swing - by Erthona - 04-19-2014, 11:54 AM
RE: The Mood Swing - by poe - 04-19-2014, 12:18 PM
RE: The Mood Swing - by John Galt - 04-19-2014, 05:59 PM
RE: The Mood Swing - by poe - 04-19-2014, 10:18 PM
RE: The Mood Swing - by RSaba - 04-21-2014, 05:57 AM



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