04-18-2014, 06:00 PM
Hi, Steph, I'll be back with crit when I've read this some more, but I think you did a really good job here, you tell the story well and in a interesting way.
Beautifully clear.
Quote:from a red phone box like a spy or a superhero
desperate to change into something magical.
Beautifully clear.
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